Self-Introduction [updated]
Subject: Introducing Rachael Dear Professor Blackstone, My name is Rachael, a first-year student majoring in Mechanical Engineering at the Singapore Institute of Technology. I am composing this introductory letter in hopes that it allows you to paint a vivid picture of who I am. My academic journey towards engineering is a compelling blend of family influence, personal interests, and a sense of adventure. Growing up around engineers exposed me to the captivating world of mechanics and innovation. My innate curiosity, coupled with a love for hands-on activities, has led me to explore diverse hobbies ranging from crocheting to baking and beyond. Before venturing onto my current degree, I earned a diploma in Engineering with Business from Singapore Polytechnic. During this time, I encountered projects that redefined my perspective and further refined my interests towards this field of engineering. My team and I were tasked with dismantling household appliances to understand their inner wo...
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ReplyDeleteThe flow of the pitch was good and interesting examples were shared. Can be more confident during the pitch. Nice pitch!
ReplyDeleteThanks much, Rachel, for this well written pitch. Perhaps the areas where you could improve would be in pronunciation and eye contact.
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